Thread: Comparison

Originally Posted by Sombito

Grammatical errors aside, I see where you're going with this -- the tank coming to terms with tank-dom, his brain, though being ravaged by the virus, still justifying his actions (a basic function of everyone's brain).

I'm a bit confused about the time line, though. How long was Harvy left/did he have to transform? Is the physical transformation near instantaneous while the mental transformation much slower? Are these people searching for him hours later or minutes later?

TANK SMASH!

1. I did this on my phone, sorry about the grammar
2. I'm glad your beginning to understand
3. The timeline and stiff will solve themself dude, it's a story so let it unfold on it's own

Awesome premise for a story, great job!